This obviously was my last entry for the year, I'm thinking it's probably also the one I should consider as my first entry for SOTM consideration. . .comments on this or my other major contenders would be greatly appreciative, and I would return the favor. . .my other contenders in addition to "Every Call I Make" are. . . Chubilicious (Bootylicious by Destiny's Child) Yahoo! (Celebration by Kool and the Gang) Psychology (Hey Jealousy by The Gin Blossoms) Crazy for Chips (Crazy in Love by Beyonce) & Careless Hook Ups (Careless Whisper by George Michael) Of course I haven't really axed any song I posted, but those ones are my most creative in my opinion--opinions on any of my songs (since everything I've posted here thus far has been this month) would be great. . .thank you and good luck in the New Year, I will be taking your opinions seriously on each song to weigh them against each other, also to know what songs to use to announce the Grand Opening of my website sometime next year--a personal site about my parodies and parodies by friends. . .hopefully which can include some of you who I am slowly befriending "internet-wise".

I liked this. Seemed like an "inverse" of the OS, but great all the same. Happy new year to you Sir

Not only do I like this, but the OS is in my brain radio so my ears should be able to pick this up.

Like a Jason said, a good reversal of TOS. Good recording, too, Dave.

I like it...very well done..555

SOTM - I'd say nice twist on the original but the word "nice" somehow feels displaced considering the content! ;-)

Good recording too though I must confess that it gave me kind of a creepy feeling to hear it sung by a guy, I've always imagined Sting stalking some woman, maybe you could have your wife or girlfriend sing it the next time you have lyrics like this, or claime in the intro that it's from the wievpoint of some young boy stalked by Wacko Jacko! (And if so, sample same horror screams from "Thriller" and sneak them into the recording, bwa-ha-ha-ha-ha). :-)

I had the same idea a little while back, I was about to write it, then forgot what I was going to write. Great job jogging my memory with your version of the same idea!

SOTM-Great

(SOTM) Pretty good concept, pretty good execution. You are above average, Dave!

(SOTM) What a great twist on TOS! I have never looked at this song from the stalked person's perspective before, but it was a great idea with an even funnier execution. The pacing was spot-on, too. Sting should be very proud. 555

Good, except that I would expect the stalk-ee to react with a lot more anger. Definitely a good revision of the original.----MM

(SOTM) See above. "You are like a Stray" was my favorite line. I listened to the recording again, and I'm still impressed by it.

(SOTM) Yeah, I think it's kinda ironic since Sting himself described the OS as a "stalker song!" The capitalized words kind of hurt my eyes (just a thought) but other than that, I liked it. But I was wondering, what kind of freak likes watching people pee?!

(SOTM) All the capitals looked kinda weird, but the parody itself (the whole point) was brilliant!

(SOTM) Hey, great job!!

(SOTM) this is great, B.A. Dave - I loved "I Once Made Love and Found a Pic on Your MySpace" and the whole thing paces perfectly, which shows you're an old hand at this - great to see a new face in SOTM too, so I hope you keep competing ;-)

(SOTM) I concur with other comments: very similar in theme to the OS, but a hell of a lot funnier. Keep em coming, Dave! 555

(SOTM) That's no stalker, that's paparazzi!! Very funny!

You could call this the "Kate Middleton" song, to be topical :-) Lots of fun, BAD (say, had you thought of a "Bad" parody about your acronym?)

(SOTM)Love it,Dave, 555

Nice, Dave. Good rhymes and good comment on the original.

SOTM - Creepy that I read this so close to the announcement of the arrest of Nicole Kidman's alleged stalker (on an unrelated charge though). Actually ... the whole thing's pretty creepy. Good job on it, creepy works well.

Hmm. . .actually Phil, no, but I should certainly consider it:) Thank you everyone, and I know I didn't get any points, but it was stiff competition. . .and I did metal last month in the less than classy Gross Out Competition, so I guess I'm good at gross things. Thank you wmj, yes creepy is a good word to describe both this version and the original, precisely why I wrote it. . Tim Mayfield, I was told by some other artists on the messageboard that you have recorded songs too, have you heard of the AmIRight station I host on Soundclick? If you are there let me know and I'll add ya. Stu, you are a very reassuring person, I think I'll take you up on that offer, and thanx for the comments too Cat, LOL, scarily, there are sites devoted to the subject of people who watch others well, yeah, it's scary and believe it or not the all caps were by accident. . .I type faster than I read so sometimes I hit shift thinking it's the beginning of another line, when I typed this one of the paper I was tired:) Red Ant, this song has been my most consistent performer since it's release, it's the only song other than the just released Squinting in the Dark that has never had a zero, I guess that means it was a good recording. . .it means a lot coming from you. I would respond to every comment, but I will suffice by saying thank you everyone and I look forward to next month's comp.

Great stuff... 5-5-5 for you. I also like how you varied each stanza, giving a broader selection of words than in the original.

(Artistry) This was one of the first of your tunes I read, Dave, and I like it even more this time around...you really did twist the concept well, and each line of the bridge was a good giggle.

(Artistry) I bet Sting has had his share of these. Good job.

And people still use Every Breath You Take as their wedding song. I love it!

One of your most creative hits, but seeing how I know you write your parodies, I'm afraid to meet your stalker.

(Artistry) See above (your stalker would see below ;)) !

Told ya to watch for Sting,see above,5s

(Artistry) See above. A great tribute to John Ashcroft, Dave (hehehe).

(Artistry) See above!

Good work.