Hey, where's ma song, Alvin? Ain't ma Chocolate Salty Balls good 'nuff fo' ya'?

Okay, Alvin, some constructive criticism here. I think your songs are exceptionally good - your pacing is fantastic and you have a bent for humor. But you gotta lose the South Park theme soon or folks here are going to ignore you and not take you seriously. And I think that would be a terrible shame, 'cus you have wonderful potential. I thoroughly enjoyed and voted on all your generic ones, but the South Park ones I skipped over. You are catering to a special taste with those, and I think you will find yourself short of votes with them at this venue. Maybe you could gather them all and do your own South Park website tribute instead?

Meriadoc - I have great respect for your work and your comments, but I've got to call you on this. You are correct on everything you say except telling him to lose the theme. This guy can write. I'm not sure he cares about the vote count. And, Meriadoc, you of all people know this - because you also are extremly talented (ass-kissing not intended) - as a writer you know when you've produced something good - you just get this feeling. I'd be willing to bet that what you think is your best stuff might not be your most popular and that some of your most popular works you don't believe are your best stuff. Alvin, I say write whatever you want to write but listen to everything else Meriadoc says and read her parodies. (I think you should publish a South Park booklet.)

Wll done, and so were the meals, burp. Take 5 Tums and write another in the morning.

Alvin, I'm quickly becoming aware of your knack for pacing and internal rhyme - you've got the gift, that's for sure! 5's

LOL great parody :) And sorry about lunch, I was hungry :P Burrrrrp. lol

thanks annie

The Great One speaks! It's interesting to read these reactions to your debut at Amiright, Alvin. I'd have to say they were on the money. After scouring the bowels of the Amiright archives for three years and after reading thousands of parodies, my judgment is that you were the best. A couple of authors might top you in sheer output and/or mind blowing brilliance in word-play (see John Barry and Tommy Turtle) but, you I think, had the most impressive combination of volume, difficulty of songs tackled AND humor. You were always funny ..... And hey, love that ee cummings-esque, no-caps flourish as well